Jessica Sergeant
Jessica you’ve written an essay here – there are no interactive or creative elements here at all. See the guidance notes on moodle for help with this. You need to avoid lots of writing and instead use sub-headings, bullet points, diagrams, directors commentaries, annotated stills/images, real media texts for comparison (particularly for genre Q), links, websites, logos, graphs/charts (for audience feedback data) etc.
It also seems incomplete!
Apply theories – Audience theories (GRASS, Psychographic profiles etc)
Genre – show videos of inspiration to demonstrate chosen conventions and then analyse your own video in light of this – director’s commentary or annotated stills etc.
Include audience feedback results where relevant – quotes from questionnaires, graphs etc, audience video.
Use branding theory – see pack and apply. Analyse all products to show how they’re all linked.
Mrs A
Sunday, 14 March 2010
Feedback for Jessica Sergeant
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Feedback for Emily Haworth
Emily Haworth
Some good stuff here Emily but the presentation needs work. It must not be just an essay on the blog – this is essentially what you’ve produced though! It needs to be interactive. Use subheadings and bullet points rather than full sentences. You could create a director’s commentary either as piece to camera or as voice over on video to discuss your use of genre conventions across the texts. Compare your video and ancillaries to real media products to show how you’ve used and challenged the conventions – embed videos and annotate print material to show direct comparisons. Good use of quotes and audience feedback. Instead of just writing about conventions expected perhaps you could do a spider diagram or something similar? Annotate your own covers etc. Ensue you discuss all products not just a couple!
Branding – apply theory to discuss conventions – see packs! Again try to discuss visually and then analyse all your products to discuss how they are all connected visually and thematically. Annotate the logo to analyse the connotations created. Include logos and website for institution etc.
Good use of theories and powerpoint to show audience feedback but you need to discuss what you’ve found – were your products successful? Again all this section needs to be more interactive rather than dense text.
Don’t forget to embed the audience feedback video – we did this to make the evaluation more interactive!
Technologies and conclusion – again needs presenting in more creative, visual and interactive way! See guidance notes on moodle. Tables of strengths and weaknesses, screen grabs of applications and detailed discussion of tools used through annotated texts would be most effective here.
Mrs A
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Friday, 5 March 2010
Evaluation 1st Draft by Emily Haworth
Our innovations were likely to prove successful because we researched other well known similar artists to gather ideas and create our own based on their choices. Through our audience feedback, we have found that the choices that we have made throughout the video have worked effectively. Below is an example of persons personal response.
The denotation of the music video is a typical romantic narrative that is about a boy thinking of memories of his girlfriend but allows connotations such as showing the emotions that he feels for her within the music video. The flashback sequences give the audience something to see about who the artist is singing about.
After looking at several music labels, the one that I personally think will fit well with this artist and genre of music is Sony Epic Records. Epic records have artists such as The Fray, Editors and The Script which are all similar to our artist. However, the artist that we have is quite different than other acoustic singers; more teenagers would relate to our artist and therefore buy more records. It is known that teenagers are the target audience for music as they spend more on it, therefore, the music label would be earning lots of money
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Thursday, 4 March 2010
Jessica Sergeant evaluation
This year for my media studies coursework I decided to make a music video, we were given the choice of three different tasks so I chose to form a group with three other girls to complete a music video, we decided on a music video because it was a challenge and we were all interested in music therefore eager to find out how to make one. This process took a number of weeks as we completed different tasks step by step. Starting with the planning and organising, we began our planning by deciding between us what song we would use.
Within my group I took part in a lot of planning the video as I helped planning the video, I also did a lot of this filming of the shots, I took all the photographs for the ancilary tasks and then me and my partner Kate both created a front and inside cover of the CD cover and then together we created a magazine advert for the album.
All our group decided on the target audience of ages 16-24, we decided on this because we are within this age group therefore know that a lot of people within this group are interested in music and would listen to 'Alex Johnson's' songs.
Genre
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hDieZbG3KT4
- Another music video that we linked with our research was Jason Mraz 'I'm Your's', because the style of music is very similar however his music video is completely different. After looking at his music video we decided that the style of his song was completely different to ours so we chose to stick with the black and white clips and the short narrative that was included.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EkHTsc9PU2A
- When we decided that we wanted to do a narrative music video instead of experimental or performance, we new that we were working with a slow calm song so that everything we filmed for this video had to fit perfectly with the song.
- We decided not to film the clips to follow the words of the song but to make up a story line to follow so that it was easier to follow, however we chose to not give the story an ending but to leave it on kind of a cliff hanger so that the audience could decided for themselves what happens with the couple at end of the story.
- The story we chose was about two teenagers that were in a very complicated relationship, however we did not explain anything more than this. We wanted to let the audience think about what was going on and want to watch the music video over and over again to have different theories. The male character that is miming the song in the video is the main character and then one member of our group played the female character. The shots went back and forth between the two with editing inbetween to show the difficult relationship. This was very hard to film and to get right but we made it in the end and I am very happy with how all our final products turned out.
With our chosen artist we thought it was important to keep the photographs fresh and modern looking, when i took the images i decided to make them abit quirky looking by taking them in an old dirty train station tunnel, this turned out to look really effective in the way that this acoustic singer was in the train station clearly where he shouldnt normally be. Again keeping the images very simple yet effective this kept a close link with the video, the black and white colour schemes that we chose for the video and the style that we decided to complete all the ancilary tasks in.
When i was editing the images i decided to use Photoshop to do this because it is the best programme when editing images, I thought carefully about how i wanted to edit them to make them look professional and well done. After thinking carefully about this i decided to use a filter on Photoshop named 'dark strokes' this gives the image a black a white edit however it also gives it a really strong contrast so that the photograph looks unique and like it belongs on a CD cover rather than just an ordinary image. I was also thinking about other album covers that would be on the shelves, the customer wants something eyecatching, so even though our product is simple it still would have that edge over the others because of the colour schemes and the way everything strongly links together. Also even though the genre is acoustic we wanted to make our acoustic overall product very similar looking to say, an alternative looking album cover or magazine article, because we wanted to be more creative with what we designed and this worked very well. Below is the best image i took of the character used in the video and the ancilary tasks, and below that is the edited version showing a great difference.
sex- either male or female but probably mostly female
age- obviously between the ages of 16 and 24
occupation- probably mostly students
Q2. How old are you?
Q3. What is your occupation?
Q4. On a scale of one to ten how much did you enjoy this music video?
Q5. How appropriate are the following for an acoustic music video?
- Location
- Editing
- Music
- Characters
Q7. Do you think enough effects have been used?
Q8. Does the magazine article and the album cover suit this particular music video?
Q9. Do you think it was effective to put the memories in slow motion?
Q10. Out of ten how believable does the character's relationship look?
Q11. If the album cover was to be sold in a shop would the cover attract you to buy it?
We handed the questionnaires around the group of students and filmed their responses, read the questions aloud and different students out of the group answered different questions. Unless the questions needed everybody to answer. Looking at the answers we were given, all the ones that needed a mark out of ten all got 7 and above by the students, this was very good in helping us with the results from the target audience that we wanted.
All of the feedback that we gained from handing out these questionnaires was very positive and this helped us with our products because we knew that out target audience were pleased with the finished products and this is what we wanted to achieve.
- Technologies used- To create all of our media products we used a wide range of technologies. For the music video we used an Apple Mac computer to do all the editing on and a handheld video camera and tripod to film the different clips, this proved very difficult!
- After we got all of the clips together we then decided to use Final Cut to edit the footage, this was difficult because slight problems kept occuring with our scences so at points we had to re-upload them. In Final Cut we used a few of the different effects on the programme to finish our music video such as adjusting the speed, changing the clips into black and white for the memories and then using the fading tool to fade the clips in and out. In the end using all of this technology proved very effective and worked well together with our other products.
- When creating our album and magazine advert we used In Design and Photoshop, this was not as difficult because I have experience in using both of these programmes before, especially Photoshop which I have used a lot. I used Photoshop to edit the photographs after I had taken them taking advantage of the different editing techniques that I had previously learnt. I used a filter named 'dark strokes'.
- And then we used In Design for the rest basically putting the album and magazine article together, using the sizing on this programme and the different colours and fonts all came from this programme. With help from 'www.dafont.com' for some of the fonts that we chose. This all appeared very effective in the end and pleasing to the eye, all these forms of technology were really good when preparing our tasks. We did have dificulty with images not uploading properly and computers crashing but in the end we came over these issues.
- Looking at the overall products I dont think that I would change much in our overall prodcuts, I really liked how they all turned out and was very pleased with the audience feedback.
Creative Technologies
A lot of these websites and different technologies were helpful however they all had their different problems that we faced. Such as the Macs crashing which obviously was not helpful and also Blogger not letting us upload images and videos, this was a big problem we faced and we had to try multiple times until they finally uploaded. Even though they had their problems they did not limit our creativity in any way, even on mine and my partned Kates' magazine article we magaged to place the lyrics of our chosen song around the models figure as shown below. This took a lot of tries but we managed it in the end!
This was the final magazine article that me and my partner Kate created, we stuck with the black, white and red colour scheme and used our lyrics idea using In Design and Photoshop to create just what we wanted and we were really pleased with the outcome!
These technologies have allowed us to achieve just what we wanted, a calm looking and simple three coloured colour scheme set of products, they look artistic and creative and I am very please with the outcome!
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Evaluation 1st Draft By Kate Lydon
What is music video?
We used a piece of music called Wednesday Night, which one of our friends wrote and gave us permission to use. The song is in the acoustic genre and quite slow.
The idea of our music video was to tell a story of a couple who had split up and the male singer was writing the song about his girlfriend.
In the video we created the idea of flashbacks of the girl (who i played) when the couple were in a happy relationship. We used the black and white effect to make it easy for the audience to differentiate between the memories and the real life shots.
I contributed to the project by filming the different shots and completing the ancillary tasks and also being a character in the video.
The target audience for our music video was between the ages of 16-25 because it seems that this age range is the group that has the most interest in music and especially new music like Wednesday Night.
Genre
The music we chose falls into the acoustic genre and we used conventions such as black and white effect, slow motion and fading to create recognition and familiarity for the audience. We chose to use these features after researching other types of acoustic music videos for example;
It is vital to use these elements so that the audience can recognise what type of music video it is straight away and also so that it follows the typical conventions of an acoustic music video. However it is also important to bring something new and different to the music industry and break the traditional boundaries of the genre a little. We did this by creating a storyline that didn't completely make sense. We left it to the audience to decide what had happened to the couple and how the male singer had lost his girlfriend. Also stories are usually resolved at the end, however our's didn't which allows the audience to make up their own minds what happened, or leave it as a mystery.
By doing something a little different in our video it catches the audience's attention and keeps them interested.
Our choice to do this was proved successful from the audience feedback that we got. In the questionnaire that we handed out to our target audience we asked whether or not it was easy to understand if the black and white, slow motion clips were memories or not and also if they thought this was effective. We got 9 out of 10 people who answered yes to this so this proves that it worked well.
How our product fulfils the music video requirements
- Most music videos, unless they are experiemental videos, usually give the audience a narrative. This is what we have followed with our video to create a story for the audience and reflect the lyrics of the music.
- Almost all music videos include the band or artist in them so that the audience can recognise the artist and music straight away. The music videos that sometimes don't conform to this usual convention are usually individualistic and again experimental videos.
How our product fulfils the acoustic genre requirements
- Acoustic music videos tend to be similar in terms of the style and the way it is shot. Obviously with it being a slow song the filing has to match. We have tried to create this with out video by shooting calm shots and some of the faster shots that we got we have put into slow motion which I think works really well. This is different to other genres of music for examle R&B where the tempo of the music is upbeat and the speed of the video tends to match.
- Our ancillary tasks also match our genre of music. The pages of the album are simplistic and not too bold to look at. Even though most album covers are bright and colourful so that they stand out on the shelf, our audience feedback has told us that the black and white image on the front would stand out even more that the rest on the shelf because it doesn't blend in with the other colours. Here is an example of a contrasting album to the image that we have chosen for the front of our album;

Branding and Brand Image
We first started to develop different ideas for logos that looked like this;

However in the end we decided not to put a logo on the front cover because we didn't feel that it fitted with the image. Instead we chose to use a font that continued throughout the products we created. I think that this is a good idea because even though they are different pieces they all like with similarities.
How we maintained a brand image across our products
As well as the font that we used throughout the product we also used a similar colour palette. All the images we have used have been put into black and white to create continuity. This also links with the black and white we have used in the film and I think they all link together really well.
In the magazine advert that Jess and I created we used red font like on the front of the album cover. My idea was to somehow type the lyrics of Wednesday Night out on the page so that it followed the outline of the photograph. At first this was hard to figure out how to do this but after lots of attempts we found a pen tool on photoshop that allowed us to do this.
For the text on the page which was him name and the date his album is due to release we used a bold red font that would stand out to the audience straight away when they looked at the page. We also used a white font in contrast to this which was in italics and this text was quotes that we made up to be from well known music magazines to interest the readers.
Brand Image & The Music Industry
There are thousands of artists in the music industry and today and it is a world of competition of sales and promotion to fans, therefore it is important to stand out to your target audience which is what we have tried to do with our products.
After looking at various record labels I came to the conclusion that EMI, which is a British music company and the fourth largest business group and family of record labels in the music industry. I think that EMI would be interested first of all because our artist is British so he would represent the company and also I think they would possibly distribute our media product because of the various artists that they have already signed onto their label. For example Jamie T, OKGO, We Are Scientists and Norah Jones especially because I would say she is the female version of what our music is like. Also most of these artists are what our target audience would listen to so therefore they would show and interest in our music product.
Another record label that would suit our music, if not more that EMI would, is Columbia Records. They have signed artists such as Adele, who has similar sound in her music as Wednesday Night
MGMT, an individual band who are very popular with our target audience
and also Temper Trap, another very new and popular band already.
Our product may stand out to be a little different to these artists because the music is a lot slower and more relaxing, so this is a way in which it could catch the audience's and also the record labels attention because it is something new.
Album - The album may seem to be quite simple but also I think the style of it works really well with our music video. I like the idea of the artist on the front cover facing the camera to create a personal shot and then my idea was for the back cover to have the artist with his back facing the camera and the names of the songs down his back. I think that Emily and Vicky who further developed this idea and created the back cover made it look just right.
I also like the inside cover on the left which Jess and I created. We chose to use the wall of the train station which is in every shot that we have used and to use a font on the computer that looked like handwriting. We then put text all over the wall to create a dedications page. I got this inspiration from an existing album by Leona Lewis and I thought that it looked really effective.
I the image that Vicky created on the inside where the CD goes is a really good eye catching background with the four shots put next to each other of the artist. This is individual and stands out when the case is open.
Magazine Adverts - These adverts attract our target audience because they are young looking, don't have too much information that will bore the reader and have a great image of the artist on each.


I liked this album cover of Paolo Nutini's best and I think this is what inspired usto do the four shots of our artist in the middle of the album.Also to collect our target audience feedback not only from the questionnaires that I typed out on Microsoft Word, but also the video footage that we have of the audience watching our music video and giving responses. To do this we used the video camera again and set it up and the front of the classroom. As each person answered we filmed them so we could get a clear idea and reason for the answer they had given on paper.
These media technologies have allowed our group to create something that would be standard to be sold in shops today and to appear on music channels. I think Final Cut Express is a really professional program with many different things on it to edit our video. For example we changed the colour on the parts where our artist is singing because the light wasn't brilliant in the original footage so we made it brighter so that it didn't look dull.
Looking back at my AS project when I created a music magazine I also used many media technologies. However this year I seem to have used my skills I had already gained last year and also advance them this year with new knowledge.
Last year I used Photoshop to create my preliminary and final task which is what I have done this year. I also posted my research and progress on my blog.
Instead of a video camera I used a digital camera to take photographs of the model I used to be my artist.
Last year my target audience was completely different to this year. I created a music magazine with fashion twist which was aimed at women aged 16+. I definitely had to make my magazine very feminine to appeal to this audience, including the text that I used on the contents page and the front cover; words that would attract females to want to read it. I definitely pushed the generic conventions by linking fashion into the music theme and this was a risk because there are very few magazines out there that do this. If I had to do this project again I think I would have stuck to one genre of music and not tried to incorporate something else in it as it was a lot of hard work to try and explain this in every piece of work that I did.
CONCLUSION
I thought the research that we did was in enough detail to try and explain what we were looking for and what was inspiring us to create what we have with our music magazine. The only thing that I would change in the planning aspect of this work is how we showed development on the blog. It is hard to have a practical lesson and then type up at home what happened in the lesson or when we were out filming. Also I don't think we explained how we changed from having a logo to not having a logo very well.
I am very please with our overall products and how they have turned out. At first it is hard to vision how it will look from your ideas that are on paper, and also very difficult to try and select what footage we wanted to use and which bits would really explain the narrative well.
I think the album cover looks really authentic and our ideas have worked well, with the magazine adverts too. I like how even though the adverts we created in pairs are different they still like because of the images we selected with the train station wall behind each shot. This has created continuity and familiarity for the audience.
In my opinion I found it hard at first to work in a group with three other girls after doing my project last year on my own. I always seem to have a clear intention of what I want the outcome of my project to look like and I found it hard to try and mix it with three other points of view. After time though it got easier and I think we all understood each other's ideas better and were able to work with that. Also we split the research tasks up which gave us each something individual to work on which is what I liked.
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